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Post by nobuko on Nov 17, 2018 17:30:41 GMT -5
Weapon Name: Explosive Tag Weapon Rank: B Appearance: A two inch wide by six inch long paper with a red border, covered in black ink seals surrounding the central kanji 爆 ('explode'). There is a small cut in one end of the paper for fine wire or thread to loop through, and it has a backing can be peeled off to apply the tag as a sticker. Weapon Type: -- Durability: 1 Strength: 50, does not scale by default. Abilities:-Explosion: By expending 3 chakra and making the snake seal, a ninja can remotely detonate the explosive tag. The range that they can do so is equal to double their chakra stat in feet. The detonation occurs at a speed of 50 and a radius of ten feet, the first five having the strength of the item and the second half having a strength of 25. The seal will also detonate if allowed to burn for over one post or if caught in an explosion (such as by that of another explosive tag). The tag will function in the rain, but will become ruined if submerged or caught in a water release technique. Cutting the tag before activation will destroy it, but doing so in between the brief time it activates and the time it detonates will cause multiple explosions with reduced power proportional to the size of the fragment. The tags are 'signed' with the owner's chakra. This ensures that an enemy shinobi cannot remotely detonate your tags. Backstory: Explosive Tags are a standby part of the shinobi arsenal, treasured by their wielders. The villages usually purchase them in bulk from an outside source, the original formula of the tags a jealously guarded secret but often imitated. Wielding Requirements: -- Cost to Obtain: 20xp, or 3,500 ryo.
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Post by Oliver on Nov 20, 2018 15:59:53 GMT -5
Hiya~
-Please change chakra costs to '3' -Please change the 'burn for three seconds' to 'burn for one post' -Please remove the part about foes overwriting your explosive tags. -Remove the ranking requirement to purchase.
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Post by nobuko on Nov 20, 2018 16:15:46 GMT -5
updated!
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Post by Oliver on Nov 20, 2018 16:26:17 GMT -5
Approved~
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Post by Oliver on Dec 12, 2018 17:47:04 GMT -5
The correct cost of this item should be 3,500 ryo, due to the fact that it has an ability. Please update that.
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Post by Oliver on Dec 12, 2018 18:10:18 GMT -5
Approveth
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