Appearance: A large number of senbon made of water. The needles are normal size for senbon; 8" long, 1/8" thick.
Function: The user gathers water from the air and surrounding environment to form them into a multitude (100) of long needles in a dome, 20 feet in radius. Each needle is evenly spaced out. The needles have a weapon power equal to the jutsu's power. The user then directs them to a specific target at jutsu speed. They will only travel in one direction which is towards the center of the dome. The needles themselves will travel the entire 20 feet (unless they come into contact with something before travelling the entire distance), and will remain tangible for 1 additional post before evaporating. Once launched, the jutsu itself cannot re-launch the needles. Cooldown: 2 posts Duration: 2 post
Cost to use: 10 Hidden: N/A EXP: 20 Requirements:
Last Edit: Dec 11, 2018 13:50:10 GMT -5 by Kotetsu
Forming one thousand 50 power, speed, and health senbon is gonna be a no. I'd recommend finding a smaller number, like 20, and have the user be able to increase the summoned needles in increments of 10 by paying extra chakra, capping at 60 total needles.
Please clarify how far away from the user the senbon are formed.
Please clarify the dimensions of the senbon.
Once launched, can the senbon change direction?
Please clarify how far the senbon can launch.
Finally, one post duration jutsu are ridiculously easy to timeline- maybe try increasing both the duration and cooldown a little bit? 2-3 posts/until every senbon is launched sound good.