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Post by Kotetsu on Nov 17, 2018 17:09:42 GMT -5
Jutsu Name: Secret Technique: Thousand Flying Water Needles of Death Jutsu Rank: B Jutsu Element: Water Required Specialization: Ninjutsu Handseals: One Technique-specific handseal Jutsu Power: 50 Jutsu Speed: 50 Jutsu Durability: 50 (needle health) Appearance: A large number of senbon made of water. The needles are normal size for senbon; 8" long, 1/8" thick. Function: The user gathers water from the air and surrounding environment to form them into a multitude (100) of long needles in a dome, 20 feet in radius. Each needle is evenly spaced out. The needles have a weapon power equal to the jutsu's power. The user then directs them to a specific target at jutsu speed. They will only travel in one direction which is towards the center of the dome. The needles themselves will travel the entire 20 feet (unless they come into contact with something before travelling the entire distance), and will remain tangible for 1 additional post before evaporating. Once launched, the jutsu itself cannot re-launch the needles. Cooldown: 2 posts Duration: 2 post Cost to use: 10 Hidden: N/A EXP: 20 Requirements:
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Post by Oliver on Dec 5, 2018 15:29:12 GMT -5
Forming one thousand 50 power, speed, and health senbon is gonna be a no. I'd recommend finding a smaller number, like 20, and have the user be able to increase the summoned needles in increments of 10 by paying extra chakra, capping at 60 total needles.
Please clarify how far away from the user the senbon are formed.
Please clarify the dimensions of the senbon.
Once launched, can the senbon change direction?
Please clarify how far the senbon can launch.
Finally, one post duration jutsu are ridiculously easy to timeline- maybe try increasing both the duration and cooldown a little bit? 2-3 posts/until every senbon is launched sound good.
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Post by Kotetsu on Dec 8, 2018 14:56:29 GMT -5
20 needles is not a realistic number for this technique to be quite honest. I've modified the number of senbon and showed where they generate from and how spread out they are.
I'll add in that they travel towards the center of the dome only.
I'll state in the description that the needles will travel the entire 20 feet before dissipating, that should negate them being timelined into oblivion.
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Post by Oliver on Dec 11, 2018 23:16:41 GMT -5
Approved, via talks on discord. Go nuts my man.
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