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Post by Deleted on Nov 28, 2018 21:36:50 GMT -5
Jutsu Name: Water Release: Water Whip Jutsu Rank: C Jutsu Element: Water Required Specialization: Ninjutsu Handseals: Rat, Dog, Ox Jutsu Power: 25 Jutsu Speed: 25 Jutsu Durability: N/A Appearance: A whip made of water that can stretch up to 20 feet. Function: The user creates a whip is mostly used to trap/subdue an opponent. If the opponent's strength is stronger than the jutsu's own, they will break free. Cooldown: 2 posts Duration: 2 posts Cost to use: 5 Hidden: No EXP: 15 Requirements: N/A
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Post by Kenshin on Nov 28, 2018 22:28:42 GMT -5
I suggest changung the part that says "the whip will break down" to "they will be able to break free". What you have now essentially causes the jutsu to automatically fail when someone's strength is higher.
Other than that it looks good to go.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 29, 2018 1:21:53 GMT -5
Fixed.
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Post by Kenshin on Nov 30, 2018 4:52:23 GMT -5
Looks good to me. Approved
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